Why do some indie and arthouse films feel like theyโre going in circles? In this episode ofย Frequently Made Mistakes, filmmaker, screenwriter and film critic Sudhish Kamath unpacks one of the most common storytelling traps in modern cinema: getting stuck in the problem without ever moving toward a solution.

Using Chaitanya Tamhaneโsย The Discipleย as our case study, we explore the tension between uncompromising artistic vision and the need for forward momentum in storytelling. From auteur theory to poetic justice, this video dives into why films lose audiences when they loop through the same ideaโand how to fix it.
Weโll also break down two essential tools:
1. Forward Momentumย (without sacrificing tone)
2. Poetic Justiceย (that feels earned, not tacked on)
Plus, stick around for this weekโsย Writing 101ย challenge: a practical exercise to sharpen your midpointsโbecause even slow cinema needs a turning point.
If youโre a filmmaker, screenwriter, or just someone who loves watching stories evolve, this oneโs for you.
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Music: Ivan Avakian
Published – May 10, 2025 08:36 pm IST